What great pieces. The two top pieces may be too similar to include SEPARATELY in your portfolio BUT compared to the bottom piece could really start to show growth. Think about the pose for future pieces like this, for example are they all facing forward? Could some of them facing the side, turning around, Viewed from the back of the Neck. Consider any ways to highlight and change the negative space. Interactions between the hand and the face perhaps?
As for the Tree works. I think their is definitely a relationship between the elongation of the trees and the elongation in the necks of the human figures. Think about what you feel is the relationship between the neck & the tree.
What great pieces. The two top pieces may be too similar to include SEPARATELY in your portfolio BUT compared to the bottom piece could really start to show growth. Think about the pose for future pieces like this, for example are they all facing forward? Could some of them facing the side, turning around, Viewed from the back of the Neck. Consider any ways to highlight and change the negative space. Interactions between the hand and the face perhaps?
ReplyDeleteAs for the Tree works. I think their is definitely a relationship between the elongation of the trees and the elongation in the necks of the human figures. Think about what you feel is the relationship between the neck & the tree.
Great work. Keep going.